Tuesday, December 2, 2008

Winter Walk (an unfinished poem)

Winter Walk

Pine trees leaves
playing hands in the wind
soft on piano keys.

Holding my own hand
quiet suggestion
lone life brought together
by folded feathers, pierced
with fantasia and heather.

Night becomes day
winter becomes day
and I draw closer.

7 comments:

Mindy Widdowson said...

Welcome to blogging Gab! I love you and your writing. I am happy for your upcoming move. It was the right decision.
Love your sister,
Mindy

Payne Family said...

Love the blog Gabby! That is a great poem. Keep em coming!

JEn

Carni said...

nice blog! keep on!

LUCAS said...

i love poetry,,

chinks said...

Poetry is d best medium to express oneself. best of luck for ur career ahead.

beanizer_05 said...

great piece..it is already beautiful though you labeled it "unfinished"..so how much more if you made it done??--more beautiful then :)

wow..what a great profession:)

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